High Seas Action During the American Civil War - an Editorial Review of "Course Over Grounds"

Book Blurb:

A riveting, expertly-crafted narrative, Course over Ground captivates readers with a glimpse into the American Civil War few modern novels have been able to achieve.

The autumn of 1863 proves to be one of the most consequential periods in history as the American Civil War rages into its third year. The Union's territorial gains combined with the naval blockade of the Gulf Coast have Confederate soldiers, civilians, and industry leaders alike feeling the pressure begin to mount. After several peaceful years of employment at a Mobile, Alabama shipyard, Captain Alan Chambers is suddenly compelled into service upon the high seas, an unexpected reacquaintance with the profession of his youth. As events in his hometown begin spiraling out of control, it soon becomes evident that the Union Navy will not be the only adversary he is forced to face.

A novel that gains steam with each passing chapter, Course over Ground is a vivid tale of suspense and action as much on the high seas as on the streets of the Confederate home front. Bill C. Wilson provides an exquisite look into civilian life in the wartime South with a seafaring page-turner that sacrifices neither historical insight nor entertainment. Course over Ground is an adventure that delivers on all fronts.

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Author Bio:

Bill C. Wilson was born and raised in Mobile, Alabama. A licensed merchant mariner, Bill developed a passion for writing during his prolonged stints working offshore. A manuscript for his debut novel was initiated in 2014, though it ultimately took a back seat to an evolving career and a growing family. It wasn't until August 2023, when a social media prompt motivated him to enter a historical fiction short story contest, that the writing began anew. His resulting story, A Somewhat Laughing Matter, won Bill a Bronze Medal for his efforts, and reignited a passion to complete the novel that had shown little progress over the course of a decade.

Course over Ground was published in August 2025, eleven years after its inception. Written in spurts between time spent on different ships, changing diapers, Gulf Coast hurricanes, and his kids' youth sports events, this novel was published in part to encourage any writing enthusiasts who can't seem to find the time to type, but know deep down that their story is worth telling.

Editorial Review:

Title: Course Over Ground

Author: Bill C. Wilson

Rating: 4.5 Stars

Set in 1863 “Course Over Ground” by Bill C. Wilson is a multi-layered historical thriller set in and around Mobile, Alabama, the Confederacy’s last major port in the eastern Gulf of Mexico. It follows Alan’s high-stakes voyage and return, while simultaneously tracking the ground-level impact of the war on Mobile- riots over food shortages, social decay, and the sinister mystery that threatens to unravel the city. The story intertwines two main plots. One, the blockade-running Plot where we follow Alan Chambers, a crippled former sailor turned shipyard supervisor. He is coerced into captaining a newly built ship, the Azalea, on a perilous mission to run the Union blockade. However, his goal is to sell the ship and a cargo of cotton in Glasgow, Scotland, and return with a new ship, the Belle Mina, laden with vital supplies for the struggling Confederacy. This plot is filled with tense sea trials, naval strategy, and the ever-present danger of Union cruisers and Confederate underwater “torpedoes” (mines). The second part follows Confederate authorities led by General Matthew Dorian and Colonel Martin Scruggs, who are investigating a grim mystery- bodies of young Black women found floating in the Mobile River delta. This mystery violently intersects with Alan’s life when his daughter Josephine is attacked and her adopted sister, Anya is kidnapped by the same perpetrators.

“The lookout gave a sharp whistle to the helmsman and pointed the muzzle of his rifle in a direction away from the sandbar, signaling to swing the Athena out to deeper water. He kept his eye on the floating object as the vessel neared, setting his rifle aside and craning his neck to get a better assessment. As they passed within a hundred feet, he could make out only what was perhaps a bale or sack of white cloth, as that was all that could be distinguished from the stained water.”

This excerpt beautifully shows Wilson’s brilliance in building gripping suspense and an incredibly effective and hooking opening that immediately establishes a tone of grim reality and introduces the central mystery that will haunt the narrative. It begins with a mundane task, then introduces an anomaly and slowly focuses in on it with meticulous detail. Here, he uses precise, sensory language, which is clinical until the climax, which he then describes with visceral horror. He also cleverly uses complex sentences to build the slow, observational pace which then gives way to simpler, sharper sentences as the horror is realized, mirroring the lookout's shifting focus and rising dread.

“By Alan’s judgment they had every bit of fifty-five feet between the ship and the bank once she was dead in the water. Plenty of room to spare. He walked to Dawson’s aide, who stood rigid alongside his superior trying not to shake from the excitement. Alan consulted his watch and showed it to the men. “Under thirty seconds is well within standard,” he said, then pointed at the last remaining item on the ledger. “Propulsion?” Dawson exhaled slowly and looked at his aide with relief, nodding in agreement. “It works just fine.”

This excerpt is firmly-structured like a well-paced action sequence. Here, the language is technical and nautical, establishing authenticity. The verbs are powerful and the sentences vary in length to control rhythm. While the long, descriptive sentences build the scene, the short, sharp dialogues and internal thoughts heighten the tension.

“Hey, Merritt,” the toothless man called out to his partner, “what should we do with this one?” Josephine could only just make out a tall, dark figure approaching them as she lost her ability to fight. “Stop saying my name,” the man responded, tossing Josephine’s missing shoe into the alley next to them. “Let her go. We need to get out of here.” In an instant Josephine was let loose. She gasped for air… Everything went dark.

Here, the structure is chaotic and frantic, mirroring Josephine’s experience. Short, jarring sentences and sentence fragments simulate her panicked, fading thoughts even as hints of abrupt and violent action gets dropped. The language is visceral and sensory, with Wilson focusing on physical sensation and disorientation to convey the terror of the moment. As the passage continues, the grammar breaks down as Josephine loses consciousness, using stream-of-consciousness thoughts and fragmented perceptions. This is a powerful stylistic choice that immerses the audience directly in Josephine’s perspective. This is a brutal and distressing scene that marks the story’s dark turn and it remarkably personalizes the overarching mystery, transforming it from a distant investigation into a direct, traumatic attack on the protagonist’s family.

Bill C. Wilson has delivered exceptionally well. He has steeped “Course Over Ground” in well-researched detail, from the mechanics of blockade-running and ship design to the social and economic conditions of wartime Mobile. His characters are well-drawn and believable and even the secondary characters have distinct voices and personalities. The writing is confident, descriptive, and engaging and has offered readers who enjoy Historical Fiction, particularly set in the American Civil War, Nautical Fiction and stories of maritime adventure, Mystery and Thriller novels with a historical setting, and character-driven narratives an experience that lingers.

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