War and Influenza Changed Their Lives Forever - an Editorial Review of "An Echo of Ashes"
- DK Marley
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Book Blurb:
An Echo of Ashes is a story lost to time, then found again in century-old letters that lay in a tattered box.
Based on actual events taken from the pages, this story tells of when the Great War and the Spanish Influenza forever altered the lives of millions, including a family of subsistence farmers who also worked the oil fields of Pennsylvania.
Ella and Almon make their home in the backcountry. Almon and his sons work in the oil fields, just as their forefathers before them. As war and influenza break out, the parents seek to shield their family from the impending perils. Earl, the eldest son, is a gifted trombone and piano player. He is captivated by Lucile Lake, a girl from a higher social status. All he has to win her heart are his music and his words as the military draft looms in the foreground. Jack, a friend as close as a brother, faces the horrors of war at the Western Front. Albert's free spirit creates chaos as he searches for direction. Arthur's patriotism leads him to the Mexican border. Young Russell must suppress his fear to save a life, while Little Clara remains protected from the distress.
World War One and the Spanish Influenza Pandemic are most often documented separately, yet they intersected in 1918. For those who endured sacrifice and loss during this time, looking forward seemed their only choice. The sharp echo of tragedy, carried through the ashes of what once was, likely dulled but never vanished from their minds. This is just one of countless family stories from such a perilous chapter in American history.
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Editorial Review:
Title: An Echo of Ashes
Author: Ron Allen Ames
Publisher: Historium Press
ISBN: 978-1962465960
Pages: 218
FIVE STARS
There are books that chronicle history—and then there are books that breathe it. "An Echo of Ashes" by Ron Allen Ames is the rare kind of historical novel that doesn’t just tell the story of the Great War and the Spanish Flu but rather it revives it with painstaking realism, emotional gravity, and deeply personal resonance. Rooted in the author's great-uncle's journals and backed by hundreds of letters, artifacts, and pictures, this instructive read seamlessly merges historical fiction and memoir in a brilliantly detailed tale of loss, love, responsibility, and survival.
Set between 1914 and 1919 in rural Pennsylvania, "An Echo of Ashes" follows young Earl Ames as he comes of age in the oil fields, falls in love, and ultimately joins the war effort, all while witnessing the seismic changes brought on by global conflict and a deadly pandemic. The story is told with a reverence for its real-life source material, yet it never reads like a museum piece with Ames’ voice giving it breath.
From the opening chapter, we are thrust into a rural America where beauty and danger exist side by side. In one of the book’s most stunning early scenes, a nitroglycerin magazine explosion shatters the quiet of the hills—and the innocence of youth:
“Where the Adam Cupler Torpedo Company building had stood was a giant hole that contained a few splintered, smoldering boards… Sporadic splashes of blood, a few chunks of flesh, and a couple of broken bones… lay alongside a piece of wagon wheel.”
This visceral scene sets the tone. "An Echo of Ashes" is not a sanitized view of history but rather its immersive, vivid, and raw with descriptions that are almost cinematic, capturing not just the physical devastation but the emotional ripple effect through a community built on oil, labor, and grit.
As we move forward, the character of Earl emerges as the heart of the story. He is a boy shaped by hardship and raised on music, family loyalty, and hard work and his romance with the reserved and silver-blue-eyed Lucile Lake provides a delicate counterpoint to the harshness of the world around them. In a quiet but defining moment, Earl, a self-taught musician, stuns Lucile and her mother by playing Debussy’s The Girl with the Flaxen Hair on a grand piano:
“His fingers glided across the keys… The music flowed incessantly from the instrument, coaxing Lucile’s mother from the adjoining room… ‘Claude Debussy,’ Earl replied. ‘The Girl with the Flaxen Hair.’”
The juxtaposition of this elegant moment with the rustic, coal-streaked life Earl leads is what makes the novel so emotionally potent and through it Ames profoundly shows us that amid rural poverty and looming war, beauty still finds a way to take root.
The book is deeply rooted in a sense of place—Goodwill Hill, Titusville, and the Pennsylvania oil region. These are not just backdrops but in the story they are living, breathing entities. Every pump jack, horse-drawn wagon, and clanging rig speaks to the heritage of a forgotten American industry. The story often lingers on technical detail in a manner that only someone with firsthand experience or archival depth could offer. Yet these moments never slow the pace and instead, they ground the narrative in authenticity.
But perhaps the most striking part of Ames’s story is its treatment of war and disease, not as abstractions, but as intimate, devastating forces. In one of its heartfelt passage from the Spanish Flu chapter, the emotional weight crests:
“The doctor could only shake his head. He had lost count of how many homes he had visited that week. Each one quieter than the last… The silence left behind by the departed wasn’t peaceful—it screamed.”
This is where "An Echo of Ashes" shines, not in great speeches or combat heroics, but in the excruciating silences of empty rooms, the weight of unspoken farewell, and the silent will to survive. Ames never lets the narrative drift into melodrama but instead, he trusts the true emotional resonance of these moments to do the work. Structurally, the novel unfolds chronologically, but with the feel of lived memory. Its numerous chapters progress through vignettes that mirror the rhythm of life itself and its structure lends an episodic quality that allows the reader to feel both the passage of time and the weight of each moment within it.
"An Echo of Ashes" offers something rare and deeply moving and ably bridges personal and public history, giving names and faces to the millions affected by two of the 20th century’s greatest tragedies. But more than anything, it is a tribute to family, to resilience, and to remembering.
Readers will find Ron Allen Ames’s "An Echo of Ashes" a quiet triumph of historical fiction, equal parts elegy, archive, and love letter to a generation forged in fire and ended in silence. For anyone who has ever opened a faded box of family letters and wondered what lives once breathed behind the ink, this book answers with reverence, grace, and a voice that refuses to be forgotten.
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